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Minutes of the rehearsal
Detailed timing:
9:02 start talk
9:04 start p.3
9:10 start p.8
9:13 start p.10
9:16 start p.12
9:17 start p.13
9:20 start p.20
9:20 end of talk
18 min total, so a bit too long. But the discussion can be streamlined in a few places (as discussed).
Comments on the slides:
p.2:
-Can save some time on discussing the integrated luminosity by quoting the luminosity integrated on the Upsilon(4S) (could also mention the off-resonance luminosity on the slide in writing).
-low pile-up -> low multiplicity
p.3:
-Think about mentioning ee final state for h' and tautau final state for A'. This could also save some time since then you would need to comment on these.
p.4:
-Prepare a backup slide that shows where/how the different model parameters enter.
p.5:
-add "=mh'" or similar to clarify phi=h'
p.6:
-mS -> mh' for consistency
-Reduce the small plots from three to two examples, and make them a bit larger such that the variation is visible.
p.7: "All Experiments" is probably confusing outside of Belle II, and the lumi is given. Something like "data" would be more clear.
p.9:
-"Run independent signal" is probably confusing outside of Belle II. Something like "average running conditions" might be more clear. And maybe you have a good idea for an understandable version of "Experiment X"?
-Use experiment 26 conditions for the multiplicitly plot occupancy figure.
p.10:
-Plots are quite small, move the upper plot to the backup.
-Drop comment about semi-Bayesian p-values.
p.11:
-Add forward reference to p.13 for the BF.
p.12:
-Add minimal displacement cut as footnote.