Slides are very carefully and nicely prepared.
P.1: Update the date, when it's known.
P.4: Can the subscript in the tau weak coupling constant be made less to look like “T” in the diagram?
P.6: “in two” -> “into two”
P.8, second bullet: Consider defining theta as the polar angle. (Currently first mentioned on slide 11.)
P.10: Improve font of tau subscripts in a few places? (Looks like “T”)
P.10, last line: bars over neutrino symbols are shifted.
P.11: hyphen in “particle identification” not required.
P.11: “assumptions on” -> “assumptions about”
P.12: Comment that BaBar measurement was performed using X times the Belle II dataset size (BaBar ~ 500/fb)?
Rehearsal time was about 13 minutes.